Never lasting land.

    This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture to help us. First we

     had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally

       we started our writing. I am sharing it with , please leave me a comment. Thanks! 

One day there was a family and they were going to another country called Australia and there family trip took about 4.62 hours and then they got to Australia. Then they stayed at a new house and they all said we should live here so they all lived in Australia and then it was the next day they all went camping for one night in the woods. it took 5 hours to get there, then they finally arrived. The first thing that they all did was set up all there tents and it was so hard for the kids so there dad helped them. Then they all had a walk after setting up there tents and there walk took about 5 minutes then they were finally back and it was about to get dark so then they started the fire, made smores and made yummy hot chocolate. Then they all went to sleep. Then throw the dark night there were these stick,seaweed and these things that looked like coconuts but they weren't and while they were all sleeping those monsters where looking around the woods to make sure there were no people awake.  Then they got up and they snick into each and every tent and they went and grabbed them and waited until they woke up. Then it was the next day and the whole family was saying where are we? where are we? The monsters said you are next to us the monsters and we are going to eat you and the monsters said you have a 5 second run but they did not want to run so they stayed there until five seconds was over and then they all got eaten by the monsters.