The Magic globe

“Hmm. Where shall we go this time?” Jeremy asked his brother.
“How about there!?” replied Max excitedly.
 “We’ve always talked about going there!” The brothers both put their fingers on the part of the world they had chosen, and waited for the magic to happen.
 “I wonder if it will be as fun as our last trip,” mused Jeremy, as the globe began to glow…
 “It is 2:55 in the morning and we need to find a place to go to like Paris or the north pole.” said Jeremy.
 “Wait wait wait the north pole no way I am not going there” said Max.
 “Fine we will both pick a place and then we can pick which one we want to go to at the end” said Jeremy.
 “I do really want to go to Paris but I also really want to go to the north pole” said Jeremy.
 “Which one do I pick?” asked Max.
 “Mm paris yep pairs it is"said Jeremy.  But while they were having their little fight sooner they knew they both ended up in to different countries. One was in Paris and one was in Egypt!"
 "ah what do I do? I think when Tom and I were having our little augment we both pressed to different countries and now I’m in Egypt ah help help!
Part two coming soon

The ghost land Tuhituhi.

Kia ora everyone today I am going to be showing you guys my tuhituhi of my ghost land story.



This place had once been filled with noise, thousands upon thousands of excited fans cheering as they applauded ‘the beautiful game’ being played in front of them. Now, all that remained were memories. Would this place ever be restored to its former glory? This stadium had lots of memories people would go there every day but now the stadium is all in ruins Know one knows the secret about the old stadium though this stadium is really a ghost land legend says that whoever walks into the ghost land they will hear noises and crackles and the laughter of joy from far away. There will be ghosts waiting for people to come. Others won’t go into the ghost land, some other people will be exploring the ghost land tomorrow. The next day. It is the next day and the explorer's and people are really excited and scared to find the secret behind this ghost land. Everyone go’s and explores the ghost land but as soon as everyone walks into the ghost land all they see is a rugby stadium all in ruins but that rugby stadium turned into a ghost town. Part two coming for the rest of the story.

Time to create some imagery...

For our writing this term we are learning how to create poems / rotarota or creative paragraphs.
We get a new hook each day. Here are some of my pieces of writing.
We are especially focusing on imagery and using our senses.

Kupu āhua

creative writing.

WALT create a piece of writing which includes 5 words that we have been given this week the words were : pink, huge, bridge sprinkled and daffodil.

The daffodil color story One day a girl was going for a hunt and she saw to Daffodils. and she Pick them Up and put them in her basket. then she went out of the forest And back inside her house. and she walked to the kitchen and there were A lot of daffodil and some of the daffodils were blue and the rest were pink. and white and when she finished she was super Tired Then she had a nap.